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Open Ended Response

In this passage, Lisa and her friends were jealous of Jeanne’s ski trip to Colorado. Lisa and her family were holding their annual New Year’s party, but Jeanne and her family couldn’t attend because of their ski trip (rachel). Though Lisa and her friends were happy for Jeanne, they were still jealous of her trip. Not many people had been able to go on vacation(SUKHPAL). Therefore, several people were envious of Jeanne’s trip(CHRISTINE!!). However, the trip didn’t turn out to be as well as everyone had predicted (Kajal). In fact, Lisa and her friends were probably glad in the end they hadn’t gone in the trip after all. On Jeanne’s trip, she had an accident involving an out-of-control snowboarder-amy d and kristina k. Jeanne was so hurt that she had to go to the hospital; none of her friends would’ve wanted to be in her position.-VictoriaK In conclusion, Lisa and her friends were jealous of Jeanne’s trip to but in the end were glad they didn’t go.The paragaph is a little short(J.J)